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The silence of the mourning dove,
more mournful than her song.
She’s lost her mate, her will to live,
yet time still crawls along.
Of days gone by, she dreams her dreams,
when she last heard his song.
In widow’s weeds, by empty nest,
in grief she’ll ever long.
I loved a someone, thought she loved me;
I wrote for her a song.
Now, it just brings, tears to my eyes.
The train keeps moving on.
In hobo camps along the way,
I’ve found where I belong.
Friends lost their way, their will to live,
their time will not be long.
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lms said:
the first two stanzassssssss are amazing!
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dcardiff said:
Thanks for your support and encouragement. It is much appreciated.
Cheers,
Dennis
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dcardiff said:
Thanks Tanumoy, I am honored by your words.
Best wishes,
Dennis
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Tanumoy Biswas said:
“Friends lost their way, their will to live,
their time will not be long.”
Touched and mesmerized by your words, sir. Truly… without pain, there never can exist happiness. Bow to you for this one.
Best wishes
Tanumoy
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Sue Dreamwalker said:
What a poignant poem Dennis. I felt the sadness.
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dcardiff said:
Hi Sue, the inspiration for this poem came from one of my homeless friends. I also have to tip my Stetson to Hank Williams’ song I’m So Lonesome I Could Cry. Hank lived his songs and through them we can listen to his life.
Thanks for your kind words, they mean a lot.
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maryamchahine said:
This is really beautiful in sad way…you have captured the depth of loss..and I really felt it through the photo, too. Nicely done.
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dcardiff said:
Thank for your kind words.
Congratulations on having three poems published. I am now following your blog. ~ Dennis
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LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words said:
creatures of all life are meant to walk beside someone
or perhaps fly together
mourning is even for the living….
Beautiful thoughts My Friend…..sharing sadness is part of time’s lesson plan
Take Care….
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maryrose
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dcardiff said:
Without mourning and sadness we wouldn’t have joy. It is all in the grand scheme of love.
Take Care…
)0(
Dennis
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LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words said:
that is so true, for how would we know the difference
in the tears that fall? if there was no emotional waves…
You have such a wonderful gift Dennis
you create beautiful words for me/us to see
Thank you
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just me
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